My idea for a two minute intro

For my two minute intro I wanted to have a thriller. In this i wanted to have obscure shots and camera positions and movements, The basic skeleton for my plan was to have a killer enter a girls house and the camera highlights the girl showing her to the audience and making them watch her whilst she dies, I wanted to do this to shock my audience and to scare them. I also wanted a shot with a radio and listening to its static, as regular everyday objects that are augmented can be the most obscure and unsettling thing to an audience.

I have decided on some of the shot (not all of them just yet) but I wish to use a birds eye shot for sure, as this alone is a rather obscure shot and obscurity is what I wish to aim for in my piece. The setting will be a area easily accessible to me, somewhere with an alleyway leading to some houses would be preferable.

I don't want to have a whole lot of dialogue if any, as I don't want to break the tension that I wish to create with unnecessary dialogue and ruin the integrity of the piece. With all of this in mind I know that some changes will be made to it as we come together with the groups we are put into, as I will have to compromise with others ideas, not just my own.